Comments on 1. Foundation

Last modified by Bernd Dudzik on 2025/11/03 23:54

  • Mark Neerincx
    Mark Neerincx, 2025/10/17 21:22

    1. Problem Definition — “Is the Problem clearly defined and illustrated with a compelling Problem Scenario that involves specific Stakeholders and their current Activities?”

    Applies to: Operational Demands → Problem Scenario, Stakeholders, Situated Activities

    • Operational Demands — Problem Scenario
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Frames prospective/short‑term memory loss and the need to maintain physical activity and ADLs; refusal/compliance boundaries acknowledged.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Ground the scenario in a concrete persona with measurable entry/exit conditions and baseline routines.
    • Operational Demands — Situated Activities
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Lists environments and core activities to set initial scope.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Add timing/frequency, artefacts, and common breakdowns to prepare for specification.
    • Operational Demands — Stakeholders
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Catalogues direct and indirect stakeholders; value stories surface autonomy, connection, workload relief.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Clarify peripheral stakeholder relevance and interactions, and link the key direct stakeholders to Specification — a2 Personas.

    2. Stakeholder Analysis — “Are Stakeholders well-defined using rich Personas? Does the documentation thoroughly analyze their needs, motivations, and core Values?”

    Applies to: Operational Demands → Stakeholders

    • Operational Demands — Stakeholders
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Catalogues direct and indirect stakeholders; value stories surface autonomy, connection, workload relief.
        • Value stories articulate needs and motivations across roles.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Clarify peripheral stakeholder relevance and interactions, and link the key direct stakeholders to Specification — a2 Personas.

    3. Depth of Contextual Analysis — “Does the documentation provide a deep and granular analysis of user Activities and Tasks, effectively explaining how they are shaped by the rich real‑world Context?”

    Applies to: Operational Demands → Situated Activities

    • Operational Demands — Situated Activities
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Initial environment/activity coverage provided.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Elaborate stepwise task sequences with cues, aids, breakdowns, refusal handling, and safety interrupts; add contextual constraints.

    4. Human Factors Grounding — “Does the documentation ground the design in established scientific Knowledge by articulating relevant Human Factors concepts?”

    Applies to: Human Factors → Situated Cognition, Evaluation Methods

    • Human Factors — Situated Cognition
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Identifies key HF focus areas (meaning, autonomy, social connectedness, trust, learning/memory, emotion/stress, interaction fluency).
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Substantiate each with premises (i.e. the relevance for the envisioned social robot support) and candidate measures; separate resident vs. caregiver outcomes.
    • Human Factors — Evaluation Methods
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Proposes usability and AI‑quality metrics (success rate, satisfaction, cognitive load, engagement, accuracy, robustness, trust, privacy).
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Align metrics to HF premises and anticipated claims; define instruments and procedures tailored to dementia care.

    5. Technology Rationale — “Is the envisioned Technology (e.g., AI and ICT, Social Robot) described with a clear rationale for its selection, including an analysis of its potential benefits and drawbacks?”

    Applies to: Technology → AI and ICT, Social Robot

    • Technology — AI and ICT
      • Meets the criterion:
        • LLM‑based personalisation, TTS, and preference memory proposed with needed context signals.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Balance benefits with risks (confabulations, privacy); clarify on‑device vs. cloud, consent, and data minimisation.
    • Technology — Social Robot
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Compares Pepper/Nao/MiRo; chooses MiRo for comfort and room‑level fit.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Analyse limitations (navigation, hygiene, durability) and state mitigations (room‑assigned usage, override protocols, maintenance plan).

    6. Component Integration — “How well are the Operational Demands, Human Factors, and Technology integrated to form a coherent and justified Foundation for the project?”

    Applies to: Operational Demands, Human Factors, Technology

    • Meets the criterion:
      • Technology plan (MiRo + LLM/TTS) aligns with activity prompting and social contact needs and HF emphases.
    • (Potential) Improvements:
      • Provide an explicit mapping connecting demands → HF → enabling technology.

     

  • Bernd Dudzik
    Bernd Dudzik, 2025/11/03 23:54

    Feedback on Revised Draft

    1. Problem Definition: "Is the Problem clearly defined and illustrated with a compelling Problem Scenario that involves specific Stakeholders and their current Activities?"

    Applies to: Operational Demands – Problem Scenario, Stakeholders, Situated Activities

    Operational Demands – Problem Scenario

    Meets the criterion:

    • Identifies prospective/short-term memory issues affecting initiation/compliance.
    • Intends to preserve human interaction while reducing caregiver workload.

    (Potential) Improvements:

    • Ground in a concrete persona with measurable entry/exit conditions and baselines.

    2. Stakeholder Analysis: "Are Stakeholders well-defined using rich Personas? Does the documentation thoroughly analyze their needs, motivations, and core Values?"

    Applies to: Operational Demands – Stakeholders

    Operational Demands – Stakeholders

    Meets the criterion:

    • Stakeholder lists and value stories present (autonomy, connection, workload relief).

    (Potential) Improvements:

    • Elevate to rich personas with routines/constraints
    • Map value tensions and communication loops (caregiver–family).

     

     

    3. Depth of Contextual Analysis: "Does the documentation provide a deep and granular analysis of user Activities and Tasks, effectively explaining how the rich real-world Context shapes them?"

    Applies to: Operational Demands – Situated Activities

    Operational Demands – Situated Activities

    Meets the criterion:

    • Key environments and activities identified (socialising, dancing, music).

    (Potential) Improvements:

    • Provide stepwise decompositions with preconditions, artefacts, breakdowns, context constraints, and frequency/duration.
    • Add organisational constraints (staffing, quiet hours) and refusal handling.

     

     

    4. Human Factors Grounding: "Does the documentation ground the design in established scientific Knowledge by articulating relevant Human Factors concepts?"

    Applies to: Human Factors – Situated Cognition, Evaluation Methods

    Human Factors – Situated Cognition

    Meets the criterion:

    • Enumerates HF aspects (meaning, autonomy, social connection, engagement, trust, learning/memory, emotion/stress, interaction fluency).

    (Potential) Improvements:

    • Add literature-grounded premises and dementia-appropriate instruments; map constructs to effects and measures.
    • Separate resident vs. caregiver outcomes and specify measurement timing.

     

    5. Technology Rationale: "Is the envisioned Technology (e.g., AI and ICT, Social Robot) described with a clear rationale for its selection, including an analysis of its potential benefits and drawbacks?"

    Applies to: Technology – AI and ICT, Social Robot

    Technology – AI and ICT / Social Robot

    Meets the criterion:

    • Initial rationale for LLM-based personalisation; comparative robot consideration leading to MiRo.

    (Potential) Improvements:

    • Tie selection to operational demands (e.g., mobility vs. MiRo’s navigation limits); add privacy/LLM reliability/affect-recognition risks and mitigations.

     

    6. Component Integration: "How well are the Operational Demands, Human Factors, and Technology integrated to form a coherent and justified Foundation for the project?"

    Applies to: Operational Demands, Human Factors, Technology

    Foundation – Component Integration

    Meets the criterion:

    • High-level alignment between memory-related problems, autonomy values, and conversational AI support.

    (Potential) Improvements:

    • More explicitly link Operational Demands and Human Factor knowledge to the potential of the surveyed Technology.