Comments on 1. Foundation

Last modified by Bernd Dudzik on 2025/11/03 23:50

  • Mark Neerincx
    Mark Neerincx, 2025/10/17 20:28

    1. Problem Definition — “Is the Problem clearly defined and illustrated with a compelling Problem Scenario that involves specific Stakeholders and their current Activities?”

    Applies to: Operational Demands → Problem Scenario, Stakeholders, Situated Activities

    • Operational Demands — Problem Scenario
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Presents a concrete narrative (resident, caregiver, family) foregrounding loneliness, planning difficulty, and coordination constraints in a dementia care center.
        • Highlights practical limitations (limited caregiver time; need for meaningful activities).
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Add explicit operational constraints (e.g. staffing ratios, time windows, privacy rules) and success/failure conditions.
        • Clarify current activity planning cadence and breakdowns (missed prompts, overlapping schedules)
    • Operational Demands — Situated Activities
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Section titles indicate intent to cover day‑to‑day activity context.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Provide granular current workflows and sequences before technology intervention.
    • Operational Demands — Stakeholders
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Identifies direct and indirect stakeholders with concise goal‑oriented statements.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Expand to rich personas (background, routines, capabilities/limitations, values, relationships, digital literacy, risk sensitivities). That is, make separate persona tables or pages for the key direct stakeholders with the concerning links (in Specification — a2 Personas).
        • Include additional stakeholders with meaningful influence and articulate their values and success metrics.

    2. Stakeholder Analysis — “Are Stakeholders well-defined using rich Personas? Does the documentation thoroughly analyze their needs, motivations, and core Values?”

    Applies to: Operational Demands → Stakeholders

    • Operational Demands — Stakeholders
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Lists key stakeholder groups and initial need/value statements.
        • Identifies direct and indirect stakeholders with concise goal‑oriented statements.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Include additional stakeholders with meaningful influence and articulate their values and success metrics.
        • Include links of stakeholders to the personas in Specification — a2 Personas (make separate persona tables or pages for the key direct stakeholders there).

    3. Depth of Contextual Analysis — “Does the documentation provide a deep and granular analysis of user Activities and Tasks, effectively explaining how they are shaped by the rich real‑world Context?”

    Applies to: Operational Demands → Situated Activities

    • Operational Demands — Situated Activities
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Contextual elements and pain points are implied in the scenario.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Provide task decompositions with preconditions, breakdown points, handoffs, artefacts, and constraints.

    4. Human Factors Grounding — “Does the documentation ground the design in established scientific Knowledge by articulating relevant Human Factors concepts?”

    Applies to: Human Factors → Situated Cognition, Evaluation Methods

    • Human Factors — Situated Cognition
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Identifies meaningful activity, social connectedness, trust, memory/identity, and emotion/stress with design implications.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Link each aspect to candidate measures and operationalization strategies.
    • Human Factors — Evaluation Methods
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Placeholder indicates intent to compile methods.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Populate with concrete methods aligned to the Human Factors aspects (observational coding, mood scales, caregiver workload).

    5. Technology Rationale — “Is the envisioned Technology (e.g., AI and ICT, Social Robot) described with a clear rationale for its selection, including an analysis of its potential benefits and drawbacks?”

    Applies to: Technology → AI and ICT, Social Robot

    • Technology — AI and ICT
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Describes how personalisation, sentiment analysis, and secure ICT could support coordination; notes ethics and data protection.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Provide explicit trade‑offs and mitigation strategies (guardrails, consent, data minimisation).
    • Technology — Social Robot
      • Meets the criterion:
        • Outlines a compact humanoid robot with mobility and affective sensing aimed at reducing loneliness and assisting caregivers.
      • (Potential) Improvements:
        • Justify embodiment choice against task requirements and document limitations with mitigations.

    6. Component Integration — “How well are the Operational Demands, Human Factors, and Technology integrated to form a coherent and justified Foundation for the project?”

    Applies to: Operational Demands, Human Factors, Technology

    • Meets the criterion:
      • Conceptual alignment is apparent across demands, HF needs, and enabling technologies.
    • (Potential) Improvements:
      • More explicitly link operational demands to HF concepts and technologies.
  • Bernd Dudzik
    Bernd Dudzik, 2025/11/03 23:49

    Feedback on Revised Draft

    1. Problem Definition: "Is the Problem clearly defined and illustrated with a compelling Problem Scenario that involves specific Stakeholders and their current Activities?"

    Applies to: Operational Demands – Problem Scenario, Stakeholders, Situated Activities

    Operational Demands – Problem Scenario / Situated Activities

    Meets the criterion:

    • Concrete narrative (resident, caregiver, family) foregrounds loneliness, planning difficulty, and coordination constraints.
    • Includes explicit operational constraints (e.g., staffing ratios, activity hours, privacy policy) and success/failure conditions.

    (Potential) Improvements:

    • Potentially provide a storyboard for visual illustration of the problem scenario.

    2. Stakeholder Analysis: "Are Stakeholders well-defined using rich Personas? Does the documentation thoroughly analyze their needs, motivations, and core Values?"

    Applies to: Operational Demands – Stakeholders

    Operational Demands – Stakeholders

    Meets the criterion:

    • Direct and indirect stakeholders listed with goals/values; person-like profiles (Rebecca, John, Anna).
    • Includes success indicators for primary personas.

    (Potential) Improvements:

    • No notes.

    3. Depth of Contextual Analysis: "Does the documentation provide a deep and granular analysis of user Activities and Tasks, effectively explaining how the rich real-world Context shapes them?"

    Applies to: Operational Demands – Situated Activities

    Operational Demands – Situated Activities / Task Decompositions

    Meets the criterion:

    • Provides granular task analyses for resident, caregiver, and family with artefacts, preconditions, handoffs, and breakdowns.
    • Contextual constraints and exception cases are articulated.

    (Potential) Improvements:

    • Add a more detailed description of the environment in which the interaction takes place

    4. Human Factors Grounding: "Does the documentation ground the design in established scientific Knowledge by articulating relevant Human Factors concepts?"

    Applies to: Human Factors – Situated Cognition, Evaluation Methods

    Human Factors – Situated Cognition

    Meets the criterion:

    • HF constructs (meaningful activity, social connectedness, trust, memory/identity, emotion & stress) linked to observable indicators.
    • Person-centred care literature is used to ground design choices.

    (Potential) Improvements:

    • Could elaborate on the meaning of the columns in Situated Cognition.

    5. Technology Rationale: "Is the envisioned Technology (e.g., AI and ICT, Social Robot) described with a clear rationale for its selection, including an analysis of its potential benefits and drawbacks?"

    Applies to: Technology – AI and ICT, Social Robot

    Technology – AI and ICT / Social Robot

    Meets the criterion:

    • Balanced rationale for selecting Pepper; lists capabilities, limitations, and mitigations tied to context.
    • AI/ICT section includes personalisation and governance guardrails (consent, privacy-by-design, explainability).

    (Potential) Improvements:

    • More clearly highlight the relationship between the concepts in the first part of AI and ICT (e.g. “Personalized Interaction and Narrative Support”) to the table outlining “Trade-offs and Ethical Considerations”.

    6. Component Integration: "How well are the Operational Demands, Human Factors, and Technology integrated to form a coherent and justified Foundation for the project?"

    Applies to: Operational Demands, Human Factors, Technology

    Foundation – Component Integration

    Meets the criterion:

    • Cross-references connect context problems, HF measures, and technology choice/mitigations.
    • Planned measures align with success conditions (attendance, workload, wellbeing).

    (Potential) Improvements:

    • No notes.